Hi, in Te Ngahere for Tuhi Tuhi we have been doing a Bio poem. I made mine for my dad because it was fathers day and also I love my dad. What I found hard was finding something that he doesn't like because I couldn’t think of anything that he didn’t like . What I found easy was finding something that he liked because my dad loves a lot of things. If I were to do this again I would do it for my mum because it would be really easy and also I love my mum.
Have you made a bio poem before?
Hi Mikarie you did a pretty good job with telling as that your dad is a hard worker and does lots. of stuff for living maybe next time you could improve your spelling and also do you play on ps4 or ps5 because I play on ps4 and also what games do you play? well blog ya later!
ReplyDeleteHi Ahi thanks for the comment. I play on ps4 and I play heaps of games
DeleteKia ora Mikarie, what a wonderful poem you have written. I love you last line "I am not lazy but in energy saving mode" I think that is so funny. Sounds like your dad is a wonderful role model and works hard for your family. I wonder if you could create a cool image to go with this poem to make it stand out even more? What kind of image do you think would work with this? Look forward to hearing from you! Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi jacob I have no idea what type of image would go great with this but if you have any ideas please tell me.
DeleteKia ora Mikaire its your sister Mahana from Te Ngahere. I just wanted to say that I like your blog post about the Special Bio Poem.
ReplyDeleteI love your blog post because I loved reading what you love about Dad. I also made a special bio poem for Dad and I also added that Dad loves enchiladas, spicy food and dislikes gardening and laziness.
I think that we both know Dad as much as each other.
What is your favourite thing about Dad?
Hi hana that is very true and my favriot thing about dad is everything
DeleteKia ora Mikaire It’s Boston from your class, I enjoyed reading your post because the last sentence was funny. This reminds me of when I made my mum a card and some cupcakes for mothers day and also I like a lot of the things you have written on your poem.
ReplyDeleteDid your dad enjoy Fathers Day?
HI Boston yes my dad loved fathers day and were the cupcakes nice.
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ReplyDeleteHi Mikaire, my name is Sam and I go to Paihia School. I like your blog post about your bio poem because it is very interesting. This reminds me of the time I did a bio poem. Do you like making bio poems?
Hi Sam Thanks for commenting on my blog and yes I love writing BIO poems.
DeleteHi Mikaire i´m Eli from Ahipara School. I enjoyed reading about your Dad he sounds awesome. Maybe next time you can add a picture of your Dad. Keep up the good work. Blog ya later
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